Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2009/11/21

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Subject: [Leica] Young lovers
From: lluisripollquerol at (Lluis Ripoll Querol)
Date: Sat, 21 Nov 2009 23:21:39 +0100
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Hi Alastair,

Thanks for your detailed comments, I think that as you say the subject  
enhances this value:

Please look at the second version

the first was

What do you think?, others opinion will be welcome too, thank you!


El 21/11/2009, a las 22:41, afirkin at escribi?:

>> Back to film...
>> M6, Zeiss Sonnar Opton 50/1.5, Agfa APX100
>> Thanks....
> G?day Lluis,
> the title and the setting say it all, but the central subject is  
> just a
> bit ?distant?. I?d crop the left hand tree and row of bikes out of it,
> straighten the perspective along the line of the building/fountain,  
> crop
> the paving up to the fountain and ease out the chair on the right.  
> For me
> this would tighten your concentration on the key elements of the  
> image,
> and I?d ?burn? in the bright patch on the paving, which is  
> distracting the
> eye from the lovers.
> Cheers from Ballarat
> Alastair
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