Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2008/07/19
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]----- Original Message ----- >From: Nathan Wajsman <photo@frozenlight.eu> >I have put together a more comprehensive gallery from my brief visit >to Brighton than what I was able to show in my PAW 27. It is here: >http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606561_kfofN >Again, for the technically minded, all images with the Oly E420 and >25mm pancake. ........................................................................................................ As usual, your pictures were fun to view, but I have to say that in a lot of them, I wished for slightly different compositions. Here I think it needs more ground under the pavilion for stability: http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606122_kdz46 This one needs the whole wagon and banner showing: http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334605631 I wish the whole arch of the "Turbo" was included: http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606741_7phVb But I am completely happy with my favorite: http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606958_VyVaS This is a wonderful composition. I don't want to come off as harsh, or a know-it-all, but I'd like to recommend scanning the edges of the viewfinder for inclusion or exclusion of design elements (when time permits, of course). Easy for me to say, huh? ;~} Alan Alan Magayne-Roshak, Senior Photographer UPAA POY 1978 University Information Technology Services University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee Office Phone: 414 229-6525 | E-mail: amr3@uwm.edu Department Phone: 414 229-4282 http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Alan+Magayne-Roshak/