Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2008/07/19

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Subject: [Leica] IMG: Brighton on a windy afternoon
From: amr3 at uwm.edu (Alan Magayne-Roshak)
Date: Sat Jul 19 22:28:36 2008

----- Original Message -----

>From: Nathan Wajsman <photo@frozenlight.eu>

>I have put together a more comprehensive gallery from my brief visit  
>to Brighton than what I was able to show in my PAW 27. It is here:

>http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606561_kfofN

>Again, for the technically minded, all images with the Oly E420 and  
>25mm pancake.
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As usual, your pictures were fun to view, but I have to say that in a lot of 
them, I wished for slightly different compositions.

Here I think it needs more ground under the pavilion for stability:
http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606122_kdz46

This one needs the whole wagon and banner showing:
http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334605631

I wish the whole arch of the "Turbo" was included:
http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606741_7phVb

But I am completely happy with my favorite:
http://www.greatpix.eu/gallery/5472430_bCAV5#334606958_VyVaS
This is a wonderful composition.

I don't want to come off as harsh, or a know-it-all, but I'd like to 
recommend scanning
the edges of the viewfinder for inclusion or exclusion of design elements 
(when time permits,
of course).  Easy for me to say, huh?   ;~}


Alan

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UPAA POY 1978
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University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee
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