Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2005/06/07

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Subject: [Leica] Good Writing is Harder Than Good Photography
From: images at InfoAve.Net (Tina Manley)
Date: Tue Jun 7 06:13:00 2005
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At 08:32 AM 6/7/2005, you wrote:

>What I'm never sure about is, when listing a series, as above, should 
>there be a comma before "and"?
>Douglas

Google can find anything.  Put "commas in a series" in Google and you get:

Commas in a Series

Use commas to separate three or more words, 
<http://englishplus.com/grammar/00000014.htm>phrases, or 
<http://englishplus.com/grammar/00000008.htm>clauses in a series.

A conjunction goes between the last two items of the series.

While some authorities say that the comma before the conjunction is 
optional, leaving it out may cause confusion, so it is better to include it.

Words: Use commas to separate three or more words, phrases, or clauses.

Phrases: This morning I woke up, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and ate 
breakfast.

Clauses: In fact, the bus was full of people who got dressed, who brushed 
their teeth, and who ate breakfast this morning.

Incorrect: The street was filled with angry protestors, shouting spectators 
and police.
(Leaving out the last comma makes it look like the police were shouting, 
too.)

Correct: The street was filled with angry protestors, shouting spectators, 
and police.
(Makes it clearer.)



Tina


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