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Subject: [Leica] Re: PAW - Week 6 - Heninger
From: firkin at balhpl01.ncable.net.au (firkin)
Date: Thu Feb 10 19:06:26 2005
References: <0IBQ000NT001LF@mailsj-v1.corp.adobe.com>

This looks to me like you were "looking for a PAW". The tree shadows are 
fine, but the background with its wires, bins, wire fence etc seems messy, 
uncontrolled, unimportant and in need of a good crop. If you came down to 
the "V" shape the shadows make below the bins I think it would be stronger. 

Cheers 


Wade Heninger writes: 

> Posted Week 6 
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> http://heninger.org/paw 
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> thanks
 
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