Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/06/19
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Tom, I hate to be harsh, but there are several things that I think could be improved: 1) SIZE. It is way too small, even by web standards. 2) Composition: there is too much dead space in the foreground 3) Cropping: the half garbage can in the lower left corner and the snout of a car coming in from the left, as well as the piece of the lamppost on the lower right all detract from the image. The light is very nice, which is the redeeming quality of this image, but it needs some work. Nathan Tom Smart wrote: > I don't have a home on my web site yet for a PAW, but I'll post an image for > critique here. Would like to hear your feedback. > > http://www.sleepytom.com/PAW/untitled-5.jpg > > Thanks, > > Tom > > -- > To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - -- Nathan Wajsman Herrliberg (ZH), Switzerland e-mail: wajsman@webshuttle.ch mobile: +41 78 732 1430 Photo-A-Week: http://www.wajsman.com/indexpaw2002.htm General photo site: http://www.wajsman.com/index.htm - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html