Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/06/19
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Tom, I'd like to provide more feedback, but I could only echo Nathan. He seems right on the money to me. I especially agree with him about the lovely quality of the light in the street--well-spotted. Keep snapping. Regards, Michael Gerard geeman1066@earthlink.net Nathan Wajsman wrote: > Tom, > > I hate to be harsh, but there are several things that I think could be improved: > > 1) SIZE. It is way too small, even by web standards. > 2) Composition: there is too much dead space in the foreground > 3) Cropping: the half garbage can in the lower left corner and the snout of a > car coming in from the left, as well as the piece of the lamppost on the lower > right all detract from the image. > > The light is very nice, which is the redeeming quality of this image, but it > needs some work. > > Nathan > > Tom Smart wrote: > > > I don't have a home on my web site yet for a PAW, but I'll post an image for > > critique here. Would like to hear your feedback. > > > > http://www.sleepytom.com/PAW/untitled-5.jpg > > > > Thanks, > > > > Tom > > > > -- > > To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html > > -- > Nathan Wajsman > Herrliberg (ZH), Switzerland > > e-mail: wajsman@webshuttle.ch > mobile: +41 78 732 1430 > > Photo-A-Week: http://www.wajsman.com/indexpaw2002.htm > General photo site: http://www.wajsman.com/index.htm > > -- > To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html