[Leica] On the Beach

[Lluis Ripoll]

Thank you Don for your detailed comment, it is very interestiing and your comment has remembered me that many times, the first reaction, the first picture is the best
Best!
Lluis


> El 17 set 2018, a les 13:44, Don Dory via LUG <lug at leica-users.org> va escriure:
> 
> First, I really appreciate your three frames showing how you worked an
> image that you identified and tried to express by changing viewpoint and
> framing.  Second, I agree with Philippe that the second image shown is
> superior.  By squaring up the shadow line you emphasis the diagonal(her
> knees and back angle) of your main subject in a predominantly grid image.
> The first image shown has promise:  why is this woman at the beach but then
> huddles under both a pergola and an umbrella.  It is however too
> complicated by what is going on in the background; specifically the couple
> seemingly floating on the umbrella.  It complicates the image with a
> potential humor element I think.
> 
> The last image I think dilutes the statement being made by framing the
> shadow lines at a diagonal.  If seen singly it is a good image, but having
> seen the other image as well it is in my opinion the stronger image.
> 
> All the best.
> 
> On Sun, Sep 16, 2018 at 6:39 PM Lluis Ripoll via LUG <lug at leica-users.org>
> wrote:
> 
>> In the shadow
>> <
>> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090124.jpg.html
>>> 
>> 
>> The best Beach area
>> <
>> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090122.jpg.html
>>> 
>> 
>> A shadow area
>> <
>> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090123.jpg.html
>>> 
>> 
>> Leica M6, Summicron 50 (IV), Ilford FP4 ISO125, E.I. 100, Rollei
>> Supergrain 1:9
>> 
>> I would appreciate your opinions , I think I shall post only one, I
>> hesitate between the first and the third ones…. Thanks, your c&c are welcome
>> 
>> Saludos cordiales
>> Lluis
>> 
>> 
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