[Leica] On the Beach

[Don Dory]

First, I really appreciate your three frames showing how you worked an
image that you identified and tried to express by changing viewpoint and
framing.  Second, I agree with Philippe that the second image shown is
superior.  By squaring up the shadow line you emphasis the diagonal(her
knees and back angle) of your main subject in a predominantly grid image.
The first image shown has promise:  why is this woman at the beach but then
huddles under both a pergola and an umbrella.  It is however too
complicated by what is going on in the background; specifically the couple
seemingly floating on the umbrella.  It complicates the image with a
potential humor element I think.

The last image I think dilutes the statement being made by framing the
shadow lines at a diagonal.  If seen singly it is a good image, but having
seen the other image as well it is in my opinion the stronger image.

All the best.

On Sun, Sep 16, 2018 at 6:39 PM Lluis Ripoll via LUG <lug at leica-users.org>
wrote:

> In the shadow
> <
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090124.jpg.html
> >
>
> The best Beach area
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> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090122.jpg.html
> >
>
> A shadow area
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> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090123.jpg.html
> >
>
> Leica M6, Summicron 50 (IV), Ilford FP4 ISO125, E.I. 100, Rollei
> Supergrain 1:9
>
> I would appreciate your opinions , I think I shall post only one, I
> hesitate between the first and the third ones…. Thanks, your c&c are welcome
>
> Saludos cordiales
> Lluis
>
>
>
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Don
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