Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2012/04/09
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]OH, I love constructive negative criticism too. Those are the ones that I can learn from! On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 6:28 PM, Geoff Hopkinson <hopsternew at gmail.com>wrote: > What they said! > My additional 2 cents is that the drummer, while having the best light > looks rather mournful and static and he's not really in a compelling > setting with the exception of the wall poster that Leo mentioned. too. > Maybe some closer variants within the scene might have worked better? > > ps, you know that this critiquing thing works in all directions on > everyone's posted pics huh?? I'm just sayin' ;-) > > > > Cheers, > Geoff > http://www.pbase.com/hoppyman > > > > On 10 April 2012 11:09, leo wesson <leowesson at gmail.com> wrote: > > > Richard, > > > > I like the light, the dark foreground and silhouettes of the foreground > > musicians. The corner that you are shooting in to is kinda ugly, too bad > > you couldn't have shot more toward the artwork on the walls or just > toward > > the window. I think I would also like to see some movement in the > drummer, > > hands in action. > > > > There is a nice little sub composition of the bass player against the > > painting of the girls walking. Did you explore that shot at all? > > > > Leo Wesson > > Photographer/Videographer > > 817.733.9157 > > www.leowesson.com > > > > > > On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 7:46 PM, Richard Man <richard at > > richardmanphoto.com > > >wrote: > > > > > So image threads rarely get critiques. Please take a shot of this. C&C > > > welcome. Thanks! > > > > > > http://richardmanphoto.com/PICS/20120406-L1010011-Edit.jpg > > > > > > At the reception for the show that I am a a part of at the Art Ark > > Gallery. > > > > > > -- > > > // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com> > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > Leica Users Group. > > > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Leica Users Group. > > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information > > > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information > -- // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com>