Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2012/04/09
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]What they said! My additional 2 cents is that the drummer, while having the best light looks rather mournful and static and he's not really in a compelling setting with the exception of the wall poster that Leo mentioned. too. Maybe some closer variants within the scene might have worked better? ps, you know that this critiquing thing works in all directions on everyone's posted pics huh?? I'm just sayin' ;-) Cheers, Geoff http://www.pbase.com/hoppyman On 10 April 2012 11:09, leo wesson <leowesson at gmail.com> wrote: > Richard, > > I like the light, the dark foreground and silhouettes of the foreground > musicians. The corner that you are shooting in to is kinda ugly, too bad > you couldn't have shot more toward the artwork on the walls or just toward > the window. I think I would also like to see some movement in the drummer, > hands in action. > > There is a nice little sub composition of the bass player against the > painting of the girls walking. Did you explore that shot at all? > > Leo Wesson > Photographer/Videographer > 817.733.9157 > www.leowesson.com > > > On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 7:46 PM, Richard Man <richard at richardmanphoto.com > >wrote: > > > So image threads rarely get critiques. Please take a shot of this. C&C > > welcome. Thanks! > > > > http://richardmanphoto.com/PICS/20120406-L1010011-Edit.jpg > > > > At the reception for the show that I am a a part of at the Art Ark > Gallery. > > > > -- > > // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com> > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Leica Users Group. > > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information > > > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >