[Leica] Week 34 Ymke, playing around whit light

[tedgrant at shaw.ca (TED GRANT)]

Hi Michiel,
#1/
Her bra strap should've been tucked out of sight as it makes the eyes go 
directly to it because it's WHITE! 
#2/
I feel her shoulders should've been turned very slightly toward the camera 
to give a better body line look. Not a full 45 degrees, but a tiny amount to 
make for a very slightly fuller look. Boy not much, but some! 
#3/
The light is interesting as it has the slight appearance of shooting from 
the shadow-side. On her face. Yet has the light effect of portrait style... 
"Butterfly lighting." slight shadow under nose effect.

Other than the above it's not bad, just make the slight corrections and 
it'll be, "very good!" :-)
Dr. ted? :-) 



----- Original Message -----
From: Michiel Fokkema <michiel.fokkema at wanadoo.nl>
Date: Sunday, August 23, 2009 12:21 pm
Subject: [Leica] Week 34 Ymke, playing around whit light
To: Leica Users Group <lug at leica-users.org>

> Hi ,
> 
> week 34 is here:
> 
> http://michielfokkema.wordpress.com/picture-a-week/2009/week-34/
> 
> C&C welcome and Appreciated.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Michiel Fokkema
> 
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