Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2008/04/05
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi Philippe, here are my fearless comments for this PAW The mademoiselle on the bench is an interesting one. I like the depth sense as well as the texture of the cobbles for its atmosphere. It works even better in the larger version. I feel like some other framing would have been good. I don't know, maybe a vertical with lamp post at bottom left? But then, you've got that nice curved line of the drain edge. I just saw the other people to right on my second look. The person entering from right might have been good past the trees and into the frame more? The bin right next to the mademoiselle distracts me a little (yes, I'd PS it into oblivion). The Alt has some intriguing elements, the bustle of the dog, and the stylish repeating shapes of man, his shadow and the senorita. Going from left to right, tree, lamp, shadow and trees again. I like this shot a lot. I'd cheat and remove the sign behind the man's head, or move it higher onto the wall. For long kiss you deserve a medal for handholding, but I need some element sharper with the folks soft, for it to work well for me. Cheers Geoff http://www.pbase.com/hoppyman/e http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/gh/ -----Original Message----- Subject: [Leica] PAW : Phx's 13th and alt - Paris PAW 13 is now up at : http://tinyurl.com/5sknaa Alt is here (BW) http://tinyurl.com/5om2ud Alt 2 , A long kiss? see exif ;-) http://tinyurl.com/5t9jfj C&C welcome Amicalement Phx _______________________________________________ Leica Users Group. See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information