Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2006/07/03
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]I have to agree its a great start and she will just do better and better photographs in the time to come.In the last picture she should remove the yellow flower growing out of the model's head.In all 3 picutures it is reflex of the flash. In the 2nd and 3rd i find the use of aperture to be very good but on the 1st it might be better with soften the fur some.All in all it is 3 great pictures keep up the great work Juliet. Kind regards Geir John Mason <profmason@yahoo.com> skrev: Phil wrote: > My daughter Juliet has a new Pentax *istDL DSLR and > was asked by a friend to make some portraits in a > retro-looking Cheesecake glamour style. > ...let us know what she should be doing to get > better. ...The three best shots are here: >http://pswango.smugmug.com/gallery/1624331 I agree with Walt. A great start. A comment or two. Juliet should make friends with the healing brush. In glam shots like these, the skin has to be perfect. Small blemishes are too noticable in the lollipop photo. I'd probably take out the tattoos in the other photos. Back in the day, they weren't a part of this style of photography. --John J Mason Charlottesville, Virginia DEMOCRACY OF SPEED, a Photo Documentary Project: http://www.people.virginia.edu/~ds8s/john-m/john-m.html __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com _______________________________________________ Leica Users Group. See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information