[Leica] Not a PAW, Macro Daisys

[gregj.lorenzo at shaw.ca (GREG LORENZO)]

Don Dory writes: 

> Suggestions?  First you chose an odd number which is good.  The 
> scan is pretty good as you whites are just starting to blow out 
> which is pretty good for a white flower. Composition wise, the 
> focus is on the nearer flower which is also good, but the location 
> of the closest flower seems a little off to me, probably due to weighting, 
> it would be better on the bottom than on the side.  I might have cropped
> a little tighter to exclude what is going on around the edges, or possibly 
> burn it down so less is more.
> 

Thanks Don.

You have a great eye. I brought the jpeg back into Photoshop and rotated the 
image so that the larger daisy is on the bottom right. I then cropped the 
image, which helps to minimise the background and emphasize the foreground.

I haven't read the chapter on Dodging and Burning in my PSCS book but I hope 
to get there sometime tomorrow.

Regards,

Greg