Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/02/02
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Roy: The assembly plant pictures are the best, with the girl and the yellow mustang the better of the two. The engine shot has the worker too far to the left. The same can be said of the flag shot. With the flag shot, you probably should have focused on the next one down the line and waited until she looked your way. It is the rule of thirds that would help on the engine and flag shot. The mustang shot has the girl centered, but it works because of the diagonal lines. The first one of the girl in the chair just didn't say anything to me. It looked a little contrived with the flowers and the picture frame. Should have just filled the frame with the girl, if that is what you wanted a picture of. The desk, flowers, and picture compete for attention and take the viewer away from your main subject. Too many points of interest in this picture. I had a photography instructor use the term Point of Interest (POI). Your assembly line pictures have good POI, the girl in the chair too many POI or not one central one. Regards, Robert At 08:21 AM 2/2/2002 -0500, you wrote: >For the first time I am trying to post a Paw. Could one of you look at it >and give me a bit of feedback.(Too slow loading, link doesn't work,too >dark, pictures suck ect.) >http://homepage.mac.com/royfel/ >Roy Feldman > >-- >To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html