Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/29

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Subject: [Leica] Re: PAW week 5 Steve Unsworth
From: "Eric" <ericm@pobox.com>
Date: Tue, 29 Jan 2002 11:55:52 -0600
References: <000201c1a754$13e12c20$2f06fcc1@steveuns>
 
Steve:

>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_05.htm

I like.

Your horizon isn't level.

If anything, the stationary figures behind the two skaters in motion detract
a little.  But that's a very minor nitpick.  Only after I've stared at your
image for a while do I notice them.  :)

Nice shot!

>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_05alt1.htm

Not nearly as strong as your main image.  Since your first was an homage to
Ted, continue by kneeling down for this one.  Put as at eye level to the
kids.  Let's see their eyes instead of eyelids.


Eric
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