Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/17
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]>Done with regard to a small slice and the zipper - thanks for noticing that! > >Dante > >> Dante: >> > >> http://www.dantestella.com/photo.html >> >> I like! The flash isn't too objectionable. Can see a shadow from the >> subject on the sofa behind her. The bottom right corner is too dark. I'd >> crop the top so that you can't see the bend in the sofa. That would get rid >> of some unidentified stuff in the background, too. >> >> Of course, maybe instead of the bottom right being too dark, the rest of the >> sofa is too light. In any event, darken the zipper on the pillow that's >> floating around. I'd also take a bit of the shine off of her nose and >> forehead. Her ear it too bright. Maybe her shoulder, too. >> >> I really like her expression and her pose. And the lighting on her hair. I >> have a hard time posing people. So I really admire others who can pull it > > off like you do. > > I have to say that the "improvements" have made this a beautiful image. Cheers - -- Alastair Firkin http://www.afirkin.com The Family of Man 2 Exhibit for Year one is now showing: http://users.netconnect.com.au/~firkin/FOM2%20Folder/YearOneExhibit/YearOne.html - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html