Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/16
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Done with regard to a small slice and the zipper - thanks for noticing that! Dante > Dante: > >> http://www.dantestella.com/photo.html > > I like! The flash isn't too objectionable. Can see a shadow from the > subject on the sofa behind her. The bottom right corner is too dark. I'd > crop the top so that you can't see the bend in the sofa. That would get rid > of some unidentified stuff in the background, too. > > Of course, maybe instead of the bottom right being too dark, the rest of the > sofa is too light. In any event, darken the zipper on the pillow that's > floating around. I'd also take a bit of the shine off of her nose and > forehead. Her ear it too bright. Maybe her shoulder, too. > > I really like her expression and her pose. And the lighting on her hair. I > have a hard time posing people. So I really admire others who can pull it > off like you do. > > > Eric > -- > To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - ------------ Dante Stella http://www.dantestella.com - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html