Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/13
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]on 1/13/02 8:39 AM, Don Dory at dorysrus@mindspring.com wrote: http://slideone.com/PAWimages/week02.02.html > John, I have looked at your main shot many times. I think it is a good > concept just slightly off. I like the echo of the tree but think that a > little more repetition would make it stronger: in most of these corporate > plantings they plant several trees at equal intervals. Heh, Chicago has few trees in the city especially in the older industrial neighborhoods :) I don't think adding more would help any just dilute the effect, of course it depends on placement. I like simplicity in 'graphic' shots. What I see here is 3 windows, 2 trees, & 1 door... Just think, shot with a 28mm, how much more clutter would be in there along with the extra tree if there was one unless cropped more panoramic... > I also think some other element needs to be added, probably not a person but > maybe the shadow of a car going by. I know, I know I'm not there and... > However, looking at others work sets off the creative juices. I thought the same thing mostly with a person keeping the added element small. Thanks for the feedback. Same to the others who have commented. - -- John Chicago, IL http://SlideOne.com ==================== - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html