Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/10
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Week Two, here and almost gone already... A few shots from my first roll of Pan-F. Theme this week could be "Shadows & Buildings". Separate links this week for you lazy peeps & 800x600 users ;) For the full site hit the link at the far bottom. http://slideone.com/PAWimages/week02.02.html Self Crit: I like the main tree's top being cut off and having the shadow reveal the details. It might help if the brightness of the upper right corner was toned down. The image seems a little flat... http://slideone.com/PAWimages/week02alt.02.html Self Crit: I like the boldness of the image and the repetition of the streetlights. I thought about cropping the dark object off the lower right, or does it help with balance...? Stuff: M6. 1st shot 50/2, 2nd shot 28/2. Ilford Pan-F Plus. Comments Wanted... Let 'er Rip - -- John Chicago, IL http://SlideOne.com ==================== - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html