Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2001/03/08
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi George, Some comments: Week 8: composition has lots of potential, but it is a bit cut off at the bottom. Either tilting the camera down a bit or using a wider lens would have been better, I think. A human figure on the sunlit sidewalk would have made the picture better too. Week 9: nice picture of the student, but I find the composition a bit static. Week 10: I like the composition again, but here the scanning method combined with the high-speed film lets you down. It would be nice to see what he is drawing; there is also too little detail in his cap. I know, it is difficult to achieve that with D3200, perhaps a slower film could have been used? Cheers, Nathan George Lottermoser wrote: > Trying to catch up in trying times. > > Comments and criticism are always welcome. Thanks > > http://www.imagist.com/pages/photo/paw_01.html > > George - -- Nathan Wajsman Herrliberg (ZH), Switzerland e-mail: wajsman@webshuttle.ch General photo site: http://belgiangator.tripod.com/ Belgium photo site: http://members.xoom.com/wajsman/ Motorcycle site: http://www.geocities.com/MotorCity/Downs/1704/