[Leica] The Hand (version 2)

[Don Dory]

Hello, trying hard not to hijack your image.  I would crop just a little
tighter to eliminate the right side hand and emphasis the electric symbol
on the doorway with perhaps a little more contrast.  Alternatively which
would be more in the spirit of your photography would be a crop again with
the right side hand out but with the couple definitely in the lower third
of the image.

0.02 and really not trying to take over your image, but hearing how other
people see can be helpful in seeing new image possibilities.

all the best.

On Mon, Jan 29, 2018 at 2:20 PM, Lluis Ripoll <
lluisripollphotography at gmail.com> wrote:

> Here is a new version, croped following Don’s suggestions, of course it
> enhance the hand but maybe the back comes to big, I think that a good
> version would be a little crop on the original version and dodge the person
> who is walking on the bacground, I will try it, but I also would like post
> this new version and know your c&c
>
> <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/
> 2017F110501LR5-2.jpg.html>
>
> the previous
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> <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2017F110501LR5.jpg.html
> >
>
> M6, Lux 35 pre, HP5, Xtol 1:1
>
> Thanks for looking, your c&c are welcome
>
> Saludos cordiales
> Lluis
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