[Leica] more from Yosemite, image redone

[philippe.amard]

Fine!

I'd be tempted by a square Aram
http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Playground/ARAM-PA-5047-2.jpg.html

and even by some added vignetting
http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Playground/ARAM-PA-5047.jpg.html

Amities
Philippe


Le 12 déc. 14 à 17:04, Aram Langhans a écrit :

> Combining Ted's and others advice, I cropped "almost" according to  
> the master's suggestion and darkened what remained of the branch as  
> Montie suggested.  I did not want to crop out the two leaves under  
> the log, as per instructions,  as it looked like the log needed some  
> breathing room under it to give it some context as being in the  
> water.  Since that made more of the branch visible, I darkened it a  
> bit.  Maybe more darkening is needed???
>
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Aram/f14/ca/y/ 
> Yosemite-5047-2.jpg.html
>
> So, does it look better now?
>
> Original is:
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Aram/f14/ca/y/Yosemite-5047.jpg.html
>
>
> Aram
>
>
> --------------------------------------------------
> From: "Ted Grant" <tedgrant at shaw.ca>
> Sent: Thursday, December 11, 2014 11:15 AM
> To: "'Leica Users Group'" <lug at leica-users.org>
> Subject: Re: [Leica] more from Yosemite
>
>> Aram Langhans ASKED:
>>>> Now a question.  Is the out of focus branch to distracting in  
>>>> this photo?
>>
>> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Aram/f14/ca/y/Yosemite-5047.jpg.html
>>
>> I don't think a crop helps.<<<<<<<
>>
>> Hi Aram,
>> A crop most certainly helps and makes it a beautiful "KEEPER PHOTO!"
>>
>> OK here's what you do! Please consider my crop comments as merely a
>> suggestion and not written in STONE! However? :-)
>>
>> Crop the bottom off eliminating the two center lower leaves, at a  
>> point
>> where the branch ( right side barely disappears!) along with the  
>> leaves! Be
>> very careful that they just disappear!
>>
>> Be very careful here as you want the two leaves "LEFT & RIGHT"  
>> sides to
>> anchor the image.
>> I'd also look at "maybe?" nipping a bit off the top also. Not a  
>> lot,  but
>> just enough to give the image a horizontal format rather than square?
>>
>> There you go me "OLD SON?" ;-)  It's just a smidgen of a crop, but  
>> hopefully
>> makes and saves the photo.:-)
>>
>> cheers,
>> Dr. ted :-)
>>
>>
>>
>>
>
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