[Leica] Glamour

[Lluis Ripoll]

Thank you again, I’ve just posted a new version IMHO improved

<http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Sitges/199103212_140519_0004LR5w.jpg.html>

Best wishes
Lluis

El 21/09/2014, a las 11:09, Charlie Chan <topoxforddoc at btinternet.com> escribió:

> Hi Lluis
> 
> The burn at the top is fine as it helps to frame the image. It's jut that the bottom is a bit bright and unbalanced IMO
> 
> Charlie 
> 
> Sent from my iPhone
> 
> On 21 Sep 2014, at 01:14, Lluis Ripoll <lluisripollphotography at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> Hi Charlie,
>> 
>> Thank you very much for your advice, I’ve burned the top of the image, maybe I’ve do it too much, I would try your suggestion,
>> 
>> Cheers
>> Lluis
>> 
>> 
>> El 20/09/2014, a las 12:58, Charlie Chan <topoxforddoc at btinternet.com> escribió:
>> 
>>> Hi Lluis,
>>> 
>>> The basic pic looks fine, as the composition (as usual) is excellent. The image is a bit darker at the top (maybe some vignetting if the image is cropped). Personally I would burn the lower corners a bit to balance this up. That will then focus the viewer onto the boys, the sign and the balcony.
>>> 
>>> Best wishes,
>>> 
>>> Charlie
>>> 
>>> On 20 Sep 2014, at 11:14, Lluis Ripoll <lluisripollphotography at gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>>> Glamour, Sitges 1991
>>>> 
>>>> <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Sitges/199103212_140519_0004LR5w2.jpg.html>
>>>> 
>>>> Leica M3 DS, Summicron Rigid, Ilford HP5
>>>> 
>>>> I’ll appreciate your c&c to this picture and what do you think I can do to improve it, I’ve worked on it and I’m not completely happy, on the other hand I want avoid high contrast and keep the smoothness. This was shoot with my old Leica M3 DS already dead and my first Summicron Rigid, it was a very nice lens but it was hazy and had fungus, in a light like this one, late evening the lens showed very low contrast, what do you think?. Thank you very much!
>>>> 
>>>> Saludos cordiales
>>>> Lluis
>>>> 
>>>> 
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