[Leica] The decisive moment (Cropped versions)

[Lluis Ripoll]

Thank for your comment, I’ll revisit the picture.

Cheers
Lluis

El 13/09/2014, a las 00:04, George Lottermoser <george.imagist at icloud.com> escribió:

> 
> On Sep 7, 2014, at 1:16 AM, Ted Grant wrote:
> 
>> Hi Nathan, 
>> Sorry mate I hate to disagree with you on this one. The foreground water
>> with only parts of the two buildings appearing are a complete distraction
>> from the boy alone and jumping. And full buildings standing in the
>> background. It might be different if the boy were also reflected in the
>> water????????????? Maybe?
>> 
>> The water and building reflections are a definite distraction! The three
>> points that really make the photo work are.......... Boy and two buildings
>> clean without water and reflections.
>> 
>> I made a couple of prints and the water reflections destroy the image of the
>> "THREE POINTS OF COMPOSITION" BOY AND TWO BUILDING POINTS! I find the fore
>> ground reflections quite a distraction, rather than adding anything to an
>> other wise interesting well balanced photograph. Once again........... ON
>> THE "THREE COMPOSIIONAL POINTS"
>> 
>> Your thoughts good Sir?
> 
> I think you can lose the buildings in the top half of the frame
> and get to the heart of the matter
> 
> the boy between two bodies of water.
> 
> the buildings over power the action
> 
> Regards,
> George Lottermoser 
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