Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2020/06/16
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Good evening Lluis. I think bike in the shadow the bike is just a bit too out of focus. Perhaps on a very large print this will work. I like Kids in the Paradise Garden. I think is would be a stronger more mysterious image if the senorita on the left was not there. To my mind the head distracts from the dog and the girls going out of scene. This is a matter of taste. Fading Skater. I think that if the hedge at the top was in sharp focus this would work very well with the out of focus skater implying a mistake or should not be there or doesn't belong. With a very sharp point of focus then the blurred skater would be potentially very interesting. Water games I believe would work better as a horizontal, more information possibly or at least a continuation of the horizontal. Maybe as a square. A look works very well with the eye contact with the viewer, it brings the viewer into the childrens world. Thank you for showing some work that are possibly things and thoughts in progress, possibly not realized as effectively as desired but pointing the way to new visions and outlooks. I know I couldn't go back to film as many frames as I take trying out new thoughts, ways of looking at the world, and using light and shadow. I couldn't be retired if I still shot film as the number of rolls would be excessive every day. On Tue, Jun 16, 2020 at 7:08 PM Lluis Ripoll via LUG <lug at leica-users.org> wrote: > All these are with M6, Noctilux 50mm F 1.0, film Rollei RPX 25 developed > in D-76 1:1, the film was expired. > > A Bike in the shadow > <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2020F060302.jpg.html> > > Kids in the Paradise Garden > <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2020F060410.jpg.html> > > Fading Skater (I?ve missed the focusing?. can you accept it?) > <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2020F060412.jpg.html> > > Water Games > <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2020F060407.jpg.html> > > A look > <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2020F060406.jpg.html> > > > Thanks for looking, your c&c are always welcome, thanks in advance. > > Saludos cordiales > Lluis > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information -- Don don.dory at gmail.com