Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2018/09/17
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]First, I really appreciate your three frames showing how you worked an image that you identified and tried to express by changing viewpoint and framing. Second, I agree with Philippe that the second image shown is superior. By squaring up the shadow line you emphasis the diagonal(her knees and back angle) of your main subject in a predominantly grid image. The first image shown has promise: why is this woman at the beach but then huddles under both a pergola and an umbrella. It is however too complicated by what is going on in the background; specifically the couple seemingly floating on the umbrella. It complicates the image with a potential humor element I think. The last image I think dilutes the statement being made by framing the shadow lines at a diagonal. If seen singly it is a good image, but having seen the other image as well it is in my opinion the stronger image. All the best. On Sun, Sep 16, 2018 at 6:39 PM Lluis Ripoll via LUG <lug at leica-users.org> wrote: > In the shadow > < > http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090124.jpg.html > > > > The best Beach area > < > http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090122.jpg.html > > > > A shadow area > < > http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/La+Barceloneta/2018F090123.jpg.html > > > > Leica M6, Summicron 50 (IV), Ilford FP4 ISO125, E.I. 100, Rollei > Supergrain 1:9 > > I would appreciate your opinions , I think I shall post only one, I > hesitate between the first and the third ones?. Thanks, your c&c are > welcome > > Saludos cordiales > Lluis > > > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information -- Don don.dory at gmail.com