Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2014/09/22
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]What I find fantastic in this shot is not the kids (sorry Lluis as I think it was your first intent) but the light inside the shop Philippe a frustrated BW lover ;-) Le 21 sept. 14 ? 16:14, Lluis Ripoll a ?crit : > Thank you again, I?ve just posted a new version IMHO improved > > <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Sitges/199103212_140519_0004LR5w.jpg.html > > > > > Best wishes > Lluis > > El 21/09/2014, a las 11:09, Charlie Chan > <topoxforddoc at btinternet.com> escribi?: > >> Hi Lluis >> >> The burn at the top is fine as it helps to frame the image. It's >> jut that the bottom is a bit bright and unbalanced IMO >> >> Charlie >> >> Sent from my iPhone >> >> On 21 Sep 2014, at 01:14, Lluis Ripoll <lluisripollphotography at >> gmail.com >> > wrote: >> >>> Hi Charlie, >>> >>> Thank you very much for your advice, I?ve burned the top of the >>> image, maybe I?ve do it too much, I would try your suggestion, >>> >>> Cheers >>> Lluis >>> >>> >>> El 20/09/2014, a las 12:58, Charlie Chan <topoxforddoc at btinternet.com >>> > escribi?: >>> >>>> Hi Lluis, >>>> >>>> The basic pic looks fine, as the composition (as usual) is >>>> excellent. The image is a bit darker at the top (maybe some >>>> vignetting if the image is cropped). Personally I would burn the >>>> lower corners a bit to balance this up. That will then focus the >>>> viewer onto the boys, the sign and the balcony. >>>> >>>> Best wishes, >>>> >>>> Charlie >>>> >>>> On 20 Sep 2014, at 11:14, Lluis Ripoll <lluisripollphotography at >>>> gmail.com >>>> > wrote: >>>> >>>>> Glamour, Sitges 1991 >>>>> >>>>> <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Sitges/199103212_140519_0004LR5w2.jpg.html >>>>> >>>>> > >>>>> >>>>> Leica M3 DS, Summicron Rigid, Ilford HP5 >>>>> >>>>> I?ll appreciate your c&c to this picture and what do you think I >>>>> can do to improve it, I?ve worked on it and I?m not completely >>>>> happy, on the other hand I want avoid high contrast and keep the >>>>> smoothness. This was shoot with my old Leica M3 DS already dead >>>>> and my first Summicron Rigid, it was a very nice lens but it was >>>>> hazy and had fungus, in a light like this one, late evening the >>>>> lens showed very low contrast, what do you think?. Thank you >>>>> very much! >>>>> >>>>> Saludos cordiales >>>>> Lluis >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> Leica Users Group. >>>>> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more >>>>> information >>>> >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Leica Users Group. >>>> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more >>>> information >>> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Leica Users Group. >>> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Leica Users Group. >> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information > > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information One sees clearly only with the heart. What is essential is invisible to the eye. Antoine de Saint Exup?ry in Le Petit Prince. NO ARCHIVE