Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2009/11/22
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Thanks Geoff, I already did tone down the hairline but probably not enough. I agree that it does distract. Cheers, Michiel Fokkema Geoff Hopkinson wrote: > Michiel, I follow what Alastair has said about Ymke's expression (and the > tonality). As always with your beautiful daughters, these shots are about > the eyes ansd rightly so. > In this one I think that the highlighted hairline and forehead would > benefit > from burning down if possible. That very bright area tends to take the > focus > for me. If you cover that area on the screen the photo is quite different > and those amazing eyes take centre stage, > > 2009/11/22 <afirkin at afirkin.com> > >>> HI, >>> >>> Week 47 is here: >>> http://michielfokkema.wordpress.com/2009/11/21/week-47-ymke/ >>> >>> C&C welcome and appreciated. >>> >>> Michiel Fokkema >> I love the composition, and the square works well for the portrait, but >> the subject to me seems a bit between expressions, and looks just a little >> forced. This look may be a normal one for her and therefore appropriate, >> but the casual onlooker cannot know that. >> >> Love the feel of subtle grain and the tonality. >> >> Cheers >> >> Alastair >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Leica Users Group. >> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >> > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > > No virus found in this incoming message. > Checked by AVG - www.avg.com > Version: 9.0.709 / Virus Database: 270.14.76/2519 - Release Date: 11/22/09 > 08:38:00 >