Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2009/11/21
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi Alastair, Thanks for your detailed comments, I think that as you say the subject enhances this value: Please look at the second version http://www.summilux.net/expos/voir.php?auteur=3937&page=15 the first was http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2009110101.jpg.html What do you think?, others opinion will be welcome too, thank you! Saludos Lluis El 21/11/2009, a las 22:41, afirkin at afirkin.com escribi?: >> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Barcelona/2009110101.jpg.html >> >> Back to film... >> M6, Zeiss Sonnar Opton 50/1.5, Agfa APX100 >> >> Thanks.... > > G?day Lluis, > the title and the setting say it all, but the central subject is > just a > bit ?distant?. I?d crop the left hand tree and row of bikes out of it, > straighten the perspective along the line of the building/fountain, > crop > the paving up to the fountain and ease out the chair on the right. > For me > this would tighten your concentration on the key elements of the > image, > and I?d ?burn? in the bright patch on the paving, which is > distracting the > eye from the lovers. > > Cheers from Ballarat > > Alastair > > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information