[Leica] IMG: kid shot

[philippe.orlent at pandora.be (Philippe Orlent)]

Thanks Hoppy,
I'll have a look at another crop.
Thanks for looking,
Philippe




Op 27-jul-07, om 00:56 heeft G Hopkinson het volgende geschreven:

> Philippe, really smooth and appealing tones, and presentation, but  
> then you know that.
> The highlighted cheek, hair and lashes provide a wonderful line.
> For my eye,
> The child's arm shape is distracting. I might crop just above the  
> horizontal armpit line and 5% from the right for balance (also
> removing the suggestion of the other child's eye to make him a  
> little more abstract).
> Soften the edge of the highlight at the top of the arm.
> Burn in that highlight somewhat and perhaps also the right side of  
> the OOF one above the left eye (not the in focus area beside the
> left eye).
> I would be very interested to hear your thoughts on these points.  
> Very much easier for me to learn by dissecting someone else's
> pictures rather than my own. Feel free to tell me how I have got it  
> wrong ;-)
>
> Cheers
> Hoppy
>
> -----Original Message-----
> Subject: [Leica] IMG: kid shot
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> http://www.fullflavor.be/_POR0880.jpg
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> C&C welcomed & appreciated.
> Thanks for looking,
> Philippe
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