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Subject: [Leica] Lower 9th Ward - Another 20 images
From: scott at adrenaline.com (Scott McLoughlin)
Date: Thu Feb 9 20:48:02 2006
References: <000001c62dee$73614a20$656c0e44@newukolbqveo9i>

One notable feature of all of your shots is the lack of people.
Perhaps a few wider (whether FL or or not) shots could emphasize
the lack of people in a broader area - city blocks and what not.
Might fit well when the images are organized into a series.

Just an idea. Keep shooting!

Scott

Jeffery Smith wrote:

>The widest that I've gone down there with is a 25. I had the same idea re:
>the barge. I recall seeing a telephono shot of a wooden sailing ship in a
>harbor, and the effect of including the street in that shot was to make the
>ship look mountainous.
>
>I did shoot a lot of 28mm two weeks ago, but in the proofs I always seemed
>to need to be "closer". Part of the problem was also the amount of slimy mud
>in that area. I have to wear knee boots to get around in the yards. If
>things are drier in the future, I'll pull out the 21/4 and try to get some
>front and back wide angles.
>
>Jeffery Smith
>New Orleans, LA
>http://www.400tx.com
>
>
>
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: lug-bounces+jsmith342=cox.net@leica-users.org
>[mailto:lug-bounces+jsmith342=cox.net@leica-users.org] On Behalf Of Don Dory
>Sent: Thursday, February 09, 2006 8:37 PM
>To: Leica Users Group
>Subject: Re: [Leica] Lower 9th Ward - Another 20 images
>
>
>Perhaps I haven't spent enough time with your images, but I don't recall too
>many typical wide shots.  By that I mean having a significant something in
>the foreground with reinforcing subject matter rapidly disapearing into the
>background.  Take one of your house on car images, what would it look like
>with a 21 or wider on top of the car/house with a debris field going as far
>as the eye can see.  Similarly, with the barge that started it all, an
>ultrawide shot of the gargantuan barge with the little bitty houses next to
>it.  Possibly it might work better with a 500 to 600mm lens compressing
>everything behind the barge to show the miles of destruction.
>
>I am truly sorry to ramble, but your work is important, you have a great
>start, but the scale of the story is huge and mind numbing.
>
>Rambling some more, any people that could add some humanity that grounds
>what this terrible event truly means.
>
>Don
>don.dory@gmail.com
>
>
>On 2/9/06, Jeffery Smith <jsmith342@cox.net> wrote:
>  
>
>>I've got 100 rolls of Tri-X and 100 rolls of Agfa 400. I'll keep 
>>plugging away at it. The one thing that won't happen is that I would 
>>run out of subject matter.
>>
>>Jeffery Smith
>>New Orleans, LA
>>http://www.400tx.com
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: lug-bounces+jsmith342=cox.net@leica-users.org
>>[mailto:lug-bounces+jsmith342=cox.net@leica-users.org] On Behalf Of 
>>Don Dory
>>Sent: Thursday, February 09, 2006 8:08 PM
>>To: Leica Users Group
>>Subject: Re: [Leica] Lower 9th Ward - Another 20 images
>>
>>
>>Jeffery,
>>I think that you have not found a great theme yet.  Your photos are 
>>generally quite strong in documenting destruction.  There is a 
>>randomness to them that Slobodan mentions.  I think that for you, 
>>shoot a hell of lot more
>>film, let your subconcious take control, but try to think about what is
>>attracting you to a particular scene.  Only by knowing what is drawing you
>>in can you concentrate on that aspect.
>>
>>For example you have a lot of crushed cars.  The wide establishing 
>>shots help to set the scene, but are there closer images that show the 
>>muck in the car, or the real damage to the car from the house, or just 
>>the idocy of a house sitting on a car that the wide shot does not 
>>cover/demonstrate.
>>
>>Or perhaps, with fifty plus contact sheets in front of you, you can 
>>start to edit down to a vision; or create a new shot list once you 
>>have a better idea
>>of the whole.  The place is not going anywhere anytime soon.
>>
>>Don
>>don.dory@gmail.com
>>
>>
>>On 2/8/06, Jeffery Smith <jsmith342@cox.net> wrote:
>>    
>>
>>>This is the last of the shots from the five rolls I scanned this 
>>>week, beginning at:
>>>
>>>http://www.400tx.com/9th-41.html
>>>
>>>Comments and suggestions appreciated.
>>>
>>>Jeffery Smith
>>>New Orleans, LA
>>>http://www.400tx.com
>>>
>>>
>>>
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