Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2001/03/30
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]> A fascination with headless statues and cemetaries? hmmmm this must be part > of a bigger picture. :-) Remember last blue moon when I sent a wolverine ASCII picture? Next comes in couple of weeks. Wouuuuuuuuuuu! > >> http://www.neurosoft.net/img/cafe.jpg > > > > This is quite original, very good. I wonder though if something is missing, > > somebody sitting at the table would be a distraction, maybe a candle or wine > > bottle, loaf of bread on the table could improve it. > > Perhaps? It gave me a feeling which shouted "There's been PEOPLE here!" but > they're not here now. I felt like a dog sniffing a fire hydrant. That kind > of ambiguity makes it a good photo for me. This is the case with other photos by me. Always come out slightly schizofrenic. Dunno why.. :) I like to have a kind of visual uncertainity, a tension in image, made by going off proper composition. This way has a high failure rate, as you cannot completely predict the effect, but is also sometimes very rewarding. Photo doesn't seem like a complete picture, but like a moment, taken out of life. > Just an FYI Stanislaw. > I'm on a pretty fast connection here (434k at the moment) but I haven't > been able to download an entire image of yours from neurosoft in the last > two days without the page timing out on me. We have a pretty bad cable connection by now. But it will be better I hope. > PS what temperature would you process a roll of "Foton S.A. Bydgoszcz Black > & White 100 ISO" at? I can only give you my own way for developing it: Rodinal 1+30, 20 degrees, 7 minutes, BUT you put film in developer for 45 seconds constant agitation, then put a clear water in and leave for 2 min, then back to developer for 6 minutes (two turns or one reversing every 30 sec). Gives wonderful tonal range with this film. > I like your cafe image, but, compositionally speaking, why cut off the left > end and bottom of the table? You don't gain anything on the right hand > side, though it does permit you to include the lamp on top (could you have > moved back a bit to get both?). The crop leaves the image looking a bit > amputated on the left and bottom, IMO. Yes, but also gives some unstability. This table is waiting for someone, who will move chair from table to right and equalize photo. > Also, methinks, it would be nice if you burned in the lamp a bit. I had a puny film :( Will maybe reshoot in future (after payday) :) > burning the lamp in. I agree. Might look more dramatic. OTOH I like the > "claustrophobic" cropping. Yehooooooo! You understood! "Soon ze world vil be mine!" :) - ----- St. (Stanislaw B.A. Stawowy) http://www.geocities.com/Stanislaw_Stawowy Echelon/Carnivore lines: Bob Black, Hakim Bey, Ralph Klein, Sabotage in the American Workplace