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Subject: [Leica] scenes from the OR ...paw 15
From: kididdoc at (Steve Barbour)
Date: Tue Mar 29 14:45:05 2005
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Ted Grant wrote:
> Steve Barbour showed:
> Subject: scenes from the OR ...paw 15
>> I am completing the sequence  "scenes
>> from the OR" with two recent  images of
>> colleagues at work...
> Hi Steve,
> 81911 on my screen is very dark? And if mine is correct then I'd almost
> scrub the picture as I'm loosing the important part and why you shot!  Her
> eyes and expression.!
> And I'd have cropped it tighter as some of the extraneous parts are
> distracting and take the viewers eyes away from the centre of attention....
> her eyes!
> A little something hanging on the upper left edge... crop. It would leave a
> clean line top to bottom of frame. And I'd either crop the lights upper
> right corner or I'd burn them down as they too pull the viewers eyes away
> from the nurse.
> Also burn down the lower right area which is also distracting, it doesn't
> need much but some to darken it down and giving far greater meaning to her
> face and eyes.

thanks Ted...   I am going to try to 
revise and repost ... my monitor is a 
little brighter, but I will lighten the 
image and crop,  then repost....

stay tuned   thank you...Steve

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