Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2005/03/29
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Ted Grant wrote: > Steve Barbour showed: > Subject: scenes from the OR ...paw 15 > >> I am completing the sequence "scenes >> from the OR" with two recent images of >> colleagues at work... >> >>> http://www.leica-gallery.net/barbour/image-81911.html >>> http://www.leica-gallery.net/barbour/image-81912.html<<<< > Hi Steve, > 81911 on my screen is very dark? And if mine is correct then I'd almost > scrub the picture as I'm loosing the important part and why you shot! Her > eyes and expression.! > > And I'd have cropped it tighter as some of the extraneous parts are > distracting and take the viewers eyes away from the centre of attention.... > her eyes! > > A little something hanging on the upper left edge... crop. It would leave a > clean line top to bottom of frame. And I'd either crop the lights upper > right corner or I'd burn them down as they too pull the viewers eyes away > from the nurse. > > Also burn down the lower right area which is also distracting, it doesn't > need much but some to darken it down and giving far greater meaning to her > face and eyes. thanks Ted... I am going to try to revise and repost ... my monitor is a little brighter, but I will lighten the image and crop, then repost.... stay tuned thank you...Steve