Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2003/08/21
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I find the story well told in words and photographs. The photographs support the words and vice versa. The story, as told, seems brief and to a point - however I'm not sure what point. It would seem that several of the "points" could expand in text and photos.
The house they lost.
The meetings he attends.
Does he have any support?
What does that support look like?
leicanews@myrealbox.com (David Degner)8/20/03
>if you give me thorough (non-sugared)
>critiques.
>
>What photos am I missing? Is the order good? Are any of the photos
>superfluous?
Fond regards,
G e o r g e L o t t e r m o s e r, imagist
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