Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/05/29
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi Kyle, Week 19 is certainly a good shot, but Im sure you already knew that. I have only a few things that Id suggest to improve upon it. I like the color scheme, but I think the colors or lack of I should say color in the background detracts from the subject for me. Not the top, but the bottom area where it seems a little blown out (blocked up). Also, the ceiling detracts from the composition a little for me. I like the eye contact and her attitude so the height you chose is perfect. Also, Im seeing a little flare or something over her hand and bra, is it me or my monitor? The subject definitely caries the shot! Again, good work! - -Mark At 03:21 PM 5/28/2002 -0400, you wrote: >week 19 is up -- it was a tough choice. it was one of those weeks when >you just shoot so much and you're standing there at the light table >going "holy cow! they all look great!" and when the phone rings it's >just another fabulous photo op -- sadly those weeks are kind of few and >far between: > > http://www.asc.upenn.edu/usr/cassidy/pix/paw/2002/19/index.html > >-- >To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html