Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/05/11
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi Graham, A lovely set of pictures, brings real meaning to the phrase "England's green and pleasant land" from my all-time favourite piece of music, the hymn "Jerusalem". Some specific comments: > http://www.geebeephoto.com/html/week_18.html The best colours of the lot. I wonder if the composition would have been improved if you had taken a few steps to your left so that the sign would not impose on the trees in the background and more of the right side were included--right now it feels a bit cut off. Of course, I do not know if there was some rubbish on the right which you needed to exclude. > http://www.geebeephoto.com/html/week_18_alt1.html On this one, I would be severely tempted to get rid of the electricity pylons in the background. I am ordinarily against this sort of Photoshop trickery, but in this case it would be a very minor change which would greatly enhance the image. > http://www.geebeephoto.com/html/week_18_alt2.html This has the weakest colours of the three pictures, and I do not think that the car adds to the image. Perhaps a walking person would be better, or just nothing at all. Again, an excellent and pleasing set of images. Nathan - -- Nathan Wajsman Herrliberg (ZH), Switzerland e-mail: wajsman@webshuttle.ch mobile: +41 78 732 1430 Photo-A-Week: http://www.wajsman.com/indexpaw2002.htm General photo site: http://www.wajsman.com/index.htm - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html