Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/04/22
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]>My PAW 15 is up an help appreciated. > >http://www.photo.net/photodb/presentation.tcl?presentation_id=145184 Well Rob, I'm not an expert, but for me you are too far away. The crowed cars do not say deserted and derelict to me, they suggest the building is humming. The foreground does not add anything to the image and the photograph becomes a record of the building rather than a story, and there is no way of saying Manchester without the title. Not all of this is fixable. This is a fine record of a building which may have some local meaning etc, but means nothing to me. It needs more human interest to stand alone as a photograph, not just be part of a picture story or record book Cheers - -- Alastair Firkin http://www.afirkin.com http://www.familyofman2.com ()" "'() ()" "() ()" "() ( '0',) ( '0' ) ( '0', ) (,,)(")(") (")(") (")(")(,) - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html