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Subject: Re: [Leica] Steve Unsworth PAW week 7
From: Alastair Firkin <firkin@ncable.net.au>
Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2002 09:42:36 +1100
References: <000101c1b41a$0661b2e0$49e00d50@steveuns>

>This week I think I show what a terrible editor I am. Four, count them,
>alternatives. Sorry about that. Comments and crit encouraged.
>
>Main picture is at...
>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_07.htm
>
>Alternative 1...
>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_07alt1.htm
>This is a _huge_ crop from the original negative, this was the one day I
>went out without the Nocti.
>
>
>Alternative 2...
>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_07alt2.htm
>
>Alternative 3...
>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_07alt3.htm
>
>Alternative 4...
>http://www.steveunsworth.co.uk/PAW/week_07alt4.htm
>Yes I really do hate pigeons!


For me the first image is well captured, and probably the best of the 
edited bunch. Alt 1, needs to have the background even "blacker" so 
the heads really "hang" in the air. Alt 2 is so close. The movement 
is great, but the trombones are slicing the heads in half just too 
much. Alt 3 is spoilt by the big white head in the foreground -- nice 
though the head may be, and alt 4 just doesn't tell the story as it 
should, looks like you just missed the moment.

The main image may have been improved, if the boy was separated a 
little so that we could see the ?parents in the background better. I 
like the "story" of the curious kid and the "chain" of concern from 
the parents in the background. As an aside, it looks like a spot you 
might get a "walking on water" shot, judging by the guy on the left 
in the background ;-)

Cheers
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Alastair Firkin

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