Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/02/10
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Jonathan: >PAW 4: http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=562849 "This photo doesn't exist or its owner has disabled public viewing." >PAW 5: http://www.photo.net/photodb/presentation.tcl?presentation_id=139715 >5.0: Dried fish ready for packing. >5.1: Sugar cane, a common snack sold on the street. The exterior is sliced off and the interior is chewed on. >5.2: At the dock >5.3: At SanYa these carts of small goods are a common sight "Photo not available" for 5.0 and 5.1 I like 5.2. Need more separation between the person and the water. His front leg blends too much into the dark water. His left hand is just floating in front of him. 5.3 looks like it was shot from too far away. You're not part of the picture. Looks like a recorded tourist shot more than anything. >PAW 6: http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=567898 I think it would have helped to shoot closer to the person with the video camera in the lower right corner. Put something of interest in the foreground that fills more of the frame. The focal point of the picture to me is the model. Except she's so tiny that it's hard to see any details. I do like that you've included the other person also filming this event. You've got the crew taking pictures, another person taking pictures of the crew taking pictures, and you're taking pictures of the person taking pictures of the crew taking pictures *and* taking pictures of the crew taking pictures *and* taking pictures of the model. :) I think it helps the picture if you crop in from the both the top and left side. Eric - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html