Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/02/09
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]John: >http://slideone.com/PAW2002/week06.02.html Interesting angle and framing. I like the captured motion. And the blur of his hands. My main objection is that the tones of his face blend into the background. I'd dodge his face a little to help separate it. I'd also crop the right to the bricks. >http://slideone.com/PAW2002/week06alt.02.html The first thing that pops out at me is that the plane of the film isn't exactly parallel to the wall. The doorway appears to be leaning. Eric - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html