Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/25

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Subject: Re: [Leica] Another PAW - Brian McCarthy
From: John Straus <Mail@SlideOne.com>
Date: Fri, 25 Jan 2002 21:22:37 -0600

on 1/23/02 7:37 AM, Brian McCarthy at brian@imagespace.co.uk wrote:

> http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week1.html

This shot has something going for it but the candle being merged into the
reading stand hurts the composition. It doesn't look to be an easy place to
move around to get a better comp though. Maybe by moving right but then your
window gets cut...

> http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week2.html

I think I like this one the best. I'd be one to crop off the actual window
to just above the woman's head. I wouldn't mind it if it wasn't blown out
but that can't be helped. Being so bright my eye gets pulled to that part of
the shot...

> http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week3.html

This one is fun too. I'm not sure about the overall lighting but the track,
feet, and shadow make for some nice shapes...

> http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week4a.html - alternative for week 4

The mood feels right but the shot doesn't hold me anywhere up front. I just
seem to go from right to left and stay there...

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John 
Chicago, IL 
http://SlideOne.com
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