Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/01/25
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]on 1/23/02 7:37 AM, Brian McCarthy at brian@imagespace.co.uk wrote: > http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week1.html This shot has something going for it but the candle being merged into the reading stand hurts the composition. It doesn't look to be an easy place to move around to get a better comp though. Maybe by moving right but then your window gets cut... > http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week2.html I think I like this one the best. I'd be one to crop off the actual window to just above the woman's head. I wouldn't mind it if it wasn't blown out but that can't be helped. Being so bright my eye gets pulled to that part of the shot... > http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week3.html This one is fun too. I'm not sure about the overall lighting but the track, feet, and shadow make for some nice shapes... > http://imagespace.co.uk/paw/2002/week4a.html - alternative for week 4 The mood feels right but the shot doesn't hold me anywhere up front. I just seem to go from right to left and stay there... - -- John Chicago, IL http://SlideOne.com ==================== - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html