Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2017/07/05
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]On Tue, 4 Jul 2017 Jim Nichols <jhnichols at lighttube.net>wrote: >On a breezy 4th, I was concentrating on this Skipper and did not see the >smaller insect making a photobombing pass near his head. >http://www.gallery.leica-users.org/v/OldNick/20170704-DSCF2723.JPG.html <http://www.gallery.leica-users.org/v/OldNick/20170704-DSCF2723.JPG.html> >Comments and critiques welcomed and appreciated. -- >Jim Nichols ============================================================================================================================ This is very nice, but I think you could make it better if you darkened the skipper a little and darkened the corners a lot, especially behind the butterfly and the foreground flowers. Then our eyes would go to the area where the large and small bugs meet. BETTER YET: crop just to the left of the skippers leg, and just above the (darkened) out of focus flower behind the upper antennae. You don't need all the rest of the picture. -- Alan Alan Magayne-Roshak, Senior Photographer University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee Photo Services (Retired) UPAA Photographer of the Year 1978 UPAA Master of the Profession 2014 amr3 at uwm.edu http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Alan+Magayne-Roshak/ "All the technique in the world doesn't compensate for an inability to notice. " - Elliott Erwitt