[Leica] PAW 2010 continues: Week 3

[mark at whitedogs.co.uk (Mark Pope)]

Ken,

I've just looked at your PAWs.

Week 1 - is a nice composition - but IMHO needs a little work to improve 
it - for example, altering the curve so that there's a better separation 
of tones and maybe playing around with the colour mixer/channels to 
bring out the tonality of the leaves a bit more (I'm assuming you have a 
raw image rather than a B&W jpeg)

Week 2 - Wow.  I came back to this a few times - a beautifully caught 
moment.

Week 3 - is a lovely montage which does a great job of capturing the 
atmosphere of the recital.  My only gripe is the positioning of the 
musical score and the Greg's head - it's just a little distracting.

Looking forward to week 4.  Which reminds me - I need to a) find some 
inspiration and b) pick up a camera myself!

Best wishes

Mark



Mark Pope,
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UK

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Ken Iisaka wrote:
> Greg Anderson and Elizabeth Roe at the eg 10 conference.
> 
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/kiisaka/PAW2010/_1221909.jpg.html
> 
> C&C Appreciated
>