Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2004/11/18
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Thank you very much for your critical look at my image, Matt. I learned from your thoughts and I hope I will be able to make better pictures because of them. Adam On Thu, 18 Nov 2004 21:17:53 +0800, Matt Morgan <mattmorgan1@mac.com> wrote: > Only subjective critical thing to say - although hindsight is a > wonderful thing - the road is distracting and so is the fence. This > should be a 'timeless' image, so the fence dates it. Because the clouds > 'make' the picture, it might have been worthwhile going over to the > fence to shoot, which would have eliminated the fence and road. > > In the film-world, the term mis-en-scene basically means that every > single element in the frame means something and contributes to the > central story/action. When this is translated into stills photography, > it means, when we have the time to do so, check every bit of the frame > to see if the small parts contribute to the bigger picture or distract. > > That aside, very nice. It's a 'wish I was there moment'. > > Thanks, Matt > > > > On 16 Nov 2004, at 2:52, Adam Bridge wrote: > > > After posting some digital images I'm now working on my slides and > > black and white images that I shot on the trip to the south-west. > > > > This is a three-panel panorama taken within five miles of the entrance > > to the Navajo Triball Park at Monument Valley. > > > > <http://www.splitsecondfilms.com/2004-October/ > > MonumentValleyPanorama.jpg> > >