Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2004/11/08
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Don, Thank you very much for your comments. No no I am pleased to hear how you described. I wasnt lucky enough to have someone evaluate my photos for quite a long time. I appreciate your complement. About 1_33_2A, there was a busy street on my back, maybe shooting from the other side with a long lens should do. I will try shooting it from different perspectives and maybe that means more shooting at this subject. On 1_36_1_A, I tried to include the shadow completely, and after hearing your comment, I did recognize the noise. Actually there is a lot of rooms for moving around, so I will try shooting it again in different hour ranges. 1_36_5_A, this is located one floor above the JR concourse and there are clouds of people moving and I did cut off tips of heads accidentally came into the frame. After hearing your comment, I kind of think that it might look better if I used the tripods (i dont know if it is allowed) and include the full or upper half of passengers walking while taking it with 1/2 to 1/4. With the 21mm on my Leica, I can do 1/4 handheld. So I will try to visit this weekend or so. Best Regards, Tom Kumagai >Tom, >Before I get into comments I want to start with your ability to see >images in places most will pass by is very good. Second, these first >postings remind me very much of Geebee's (Grahams) first postings. You >could see the talent, but at first was much unfocused. Really, this is >high praise indeed. > >So, starting with: >http://gallery.leica-users.org/album85/1_33_2_A > >You shot it as a vertical, but to me the image seems to be the >horizontal juxtaposition of the shadows on the right with the >refreshment stand on the left, possibly with shadows on the vendor in >the stand. Possibly, the human activity of the customer with the vendor >with the shadows. > >Next up: >http://gallery.leica-users.org/album85/1_36_1_A > >You have found a very nice sculpture and shadow effect. What doesn't >work is the huge amount of the rest of the world that intrudes. Think >through the situation: can you move up and back and use a longer lens to >isolate the scene? What would happen on the opposite end of the day >with the shadows going the other way? If the terrain only allows this >angle, then is there a period that you can combine the shadows and >people or a dog or some of Graham's blow up geese? What about shoot >directly up from underneath into a clear sky? > >Last: >http://gallery.leica-users.org/album85/1_36_5_A > >This is an interesting assignment. The light and texture of the view >will make you work to find the strongest image. Assuming the tracks are >just under the cloth so that moving forward is not an option then what >would happen if you squared off to the ceiling and the sign to make a >more formal image? Another possibility would be to include the heads of >passengers waiting for the train. > >In summary, you have found some wonderful visual treats, the clay is >spinning on the wheel, you just have to turn the clay into what you want >to make of it. > >Don >dorysrus@mindspring.com >