Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2003/10/20
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]I rushed a copy of the Steve's picture and Mark's posting to my wife, who is an Instructor for Nursing Clinical Students at our University. I think she will share. That idea, about cropping or not cropping, did your first instinct have it right? Extremely valid. Sometimes I see something in a frame, and I can't get close enough because I left my tele in the caddilac under the tree or something. I don't carry a lot of camera kit about. I have to see and shoot, and sometimes worry about getting my vision by cropping. I am often aware that I need to not betray my original vision too. Super Underwear, Hooboy! I want some! Sonny - ----- Original Message ----- From: "Steve Barbour" <kididdoc@cox.net> To: <leica-users@mejac.palo-alto.ca.us> Sent: Monday, October 20, 2003 11:09 AM Subject: [Leica] watching...waiting/PICU alt/summary > exactly... as you saw from questions in Mark Rabiner's post...he > raised the interesting issues of what made me see the image, which > image tells the story, and which is the most memorable...answer..the > original... but which works better as a pure photo, the crop... the > original is really what I wanted/want, but does it truly succeed? , > no... unfortunately..... > > so, what is the story we want to tell ? vs which is the better > photograph ?....a great discussion, thanks to BD, Ted, Tina, Mark, > Jeffery, Don...others. > > my own conclusion, a successful pic depends on your measurement, your > goal.... or- go out there and do both, take a better photo... > > sure, why not? ....Steve > > > I think the crop definitely works better as a stand-alone image. I > > would, however, want to see the original shot as part of a story > about > > the Mom and baby's PICU stay... > > > > > Ted, working on this and then hearing your comments, along with > > those > > > of Tina and Nathan, was valuable ... I was too fixated on having > > the > > > Mother there, but I must agree, it just doesn't work...I will try > it > > > the other way, and possibly, post the result.... > > > > > thanks, Steve > > > > alt/crop... > > > > http://www.leica-gallery.net/barbour/image-54555.html > > > > > > > > Steve Barbour showed: > > > > Subject: [Leica] watching...waiting > > > > > fresh from the OR.... the long wait. > > http://www.leica-gallery.net/barbour/image-54546.html<<<< > > > > > Hi Steve, > > > > This may have been mentioned... > > > > > > > > The person on the right is a distraction. Actually it's the big > > > Superman "S" > > > > letter on her chest that catches the eye first, then you look at > > the > > > child > > > > and doctor. > > > > > > > > The impact of the picture is lost because of the "S" person and > > the > > > gap > > > > between her and the doctor. I'd have cropped into the left > > shoulder > > > of the > > > > doctor to a point just re-moving the dark "hump" behind her > > > shoulder, adding > > > > a "slight" burning down of the child, left side of the frame top > > to > > > bottom, > > > > and across the bottom holding the viewers eye right to the > action, > > > > doctor-patient. > > > > > > > > Once again you prove how important eyes are in people picture > > > situations! > > > > > > > > We hear with our ears, the doctor with the "stethoscope." But > we > > > listen > > > > with our eyes!!! And that's exactly what this doctor is doing > > ...... > > > > "Listening with her eyes!" > > > > > > > > On occasion when shooting or cropping we tend to include "too > > much" > > > because > > > > of what we "know," in this case the mother on the right waiting. > > > However, > > > > she doesn't matter in this picture because she's hanging off the > > > side with a > > > > big gap between her and the action. Adding nothing to the > impact > > of > > > the > > > > "action" ...... which is really, doctor - patient. > > > > > > > > A good one never the less, all the cropping does is tighten it > up > > > slightly > > > > improving what was there in the first place. > > > > > > > > ted > > -- > To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html