Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/10/05

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Subject: Re: [Leica] Ashley #2
From: Nathan Wajsman <wajsman@webshuttle.ch>
Date: Sun, 06 Oct 2002 08:39:30 +0200
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Graham,

As usual, you are the master of light and tonality in this beautiful 
landscape. But I think the composition could be improved. As I look at 
it, I see a lot of dead space in the bottom third of the image, and a 
lot of interesting elements at the top which appear almost cut off. I 
think you should have tilted the camera up a bit, or if that was not 
possible due to distracting elements that you needed to exclude, then 
crop the bottom part.

Nathan

geebeespaw wrote:
> http://www.geebeephoto.com/html/gal4_18.html
> 
> 


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