Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/07/14
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]i think there's some really good stuff here. i love the shot of cola and dani: http://www.scottsquire.net/ssp/image-29939.html the expressions on both of their faces are excellent. and the shot of them in the taxi is brilliant: http://www.scottsquire.net/ssp/image-29938.html the dogbite photo would be better if we saw more shots of dogs in your photo essay, they're like squrrils there, but i don't think i've seen them so far. you're taking some great portraits. only advice i can give is story-wize -- i'd be thinking "what is this story and how am i going to tell it?" -- from what i've seen so far, this seems to be a story about flori and the very strange situation she's in with a cast of supporting characters. i think, if you do your job properly, everybody ought to be in love with her by the time you're finished, if you don't do your job properly, there will just be some nice portraits and all your leica will smell like a sewer for the next year. personally i'd like to read more of your diary, but i'm a wordpictureword kinda guy. there's my .02, fwiw. kc - -- To unsubscribe, see http://mejac.palo-alto.ca.us/leica-users/unsub.html