Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2001/03/13
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi Mark, Some comments on weeks 9-11: Week 9: the best of the three, nice eye contact, but it would be nice with a bit more light on her eyes. Week 10: on my screen, the pianist's face is almost totally dark. I think it would have been better if you had moved to your left so that more of his face would be visible. Week 11: again, not enough light on the eyes in my view. Also, the man's face could be sharper. I hope you take these comments for what they are--suggestions for improvements, just as I have been getting. Kind regards, Nathan - --- Mark Cohen <markc@binaryfaith.com> wrote: > > I've just put up the most current PAW. > > As always, comments and criticism are always > appreciated. :) > > > http://www.creativephoto.com/PAW > > -Mark > > > > > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Yahoo! Auctions - Buy the things you want at great prices. http://auctions.yahoo.com/